Hello! Please provide feedback on my first book! (before I submit it!)

[msgirl]

Hello,

Please forgive me for posting in this forum, as I am desperate for some feedback.

I have spent months on my book (the file got corrupt and I had to start over from scratch!)

I would GREATLY appreciate ANY feedback. I plan to try to submit it for purchase in the next few days, and am very nervous!

Here is the link:
http://www.mypublisher.com/bookshelf/bookviewer.py?d=tq%3Ey-cppl%60je%3E354479%3A

Thank you!!

[LindaL]

I can't believe you haven't ordered it yet. I would be so excited to get it into my hands that the minute it was done, I would be pacing to get the hard copy. It's a wonderful book.

You have given me a few ideas that I would like to try in the future. Nicely done.

[msgirl]

Thanks Linda! I really appreciate your comments!